Time To Haul That Baggage Out of The Rear View Mirror Old Boy

You know, if you are over say, the age of 18 (ok maybe 21 for you Americans) and you find yourself writing this sort of stuff about a bar you went to:

"everyone on here thinks that they discovered the continental. didn't happen the continental went through many different changes. some good some not. at the start of the punk movement. there were not alot of people. but as time went by more and more would trickle in. i was theres at the start. and it was fun. not alot of us. yet we all knew each other. i found a perch. on the speaker on the left of the dance floor. i would see groups come in from the suburbs. tourist we'd call them. they would point abd stare and laugh. the strange thing was a couple of weeks later you'd see a couple of them. show back up. wearing m.t.v. outfits. thoughthey didn't point or stare. a few weeks later, they wer dressed like us. though too clean and crisp. we all started someplace. me the rosegarden for suzi quartro. but it was a great place too be. Bud Burkes Island of Misfit Toys."

It just might be time to get a life.  Some spelling and grammar lessons couldn't hurt either.